My review will be fragmented. Just like the book. Give you an idea of extreme irritation. Complete sentences? Bah.
Plot good. Character sucked. Sucked hard. Constantly late. Failed all school subjects. Always hungry. Always sulking. Why do people befriend her? No redeeming qualities. Dumb. Late. Self-centered. Please kill her.
Confusing. Dialogue had holes. Many holes. No one explained to protagonist. Too dumb to understand anyway. She sulked, reader stayed confused. "I can't tell you that." Most used sentence in book.
Fragmented writing added confusion. Please stop. I want to read this. Seemed interesting. Idea is not bad. Can't make sense of it. This how protagonist thinks? She too dumb for sentences?
Why? Publisher, please why. This was published? 7 books in this series?!?!?! Who is reading? Who!
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